
Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style

The second suggestion Vonnegut makes in “How to Write with Style” is “Do not ramble.” I won’t, as he said he wouldn’t, “ramble on about that.” The third is “Keep it simple.”
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
Shapes of text are like clothing: they’re what content wears.
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
So a writer is someone who is willing to be uncomfortable enough—or is uncomfortable enough by nature—to wonder where people are, where they’re going, and why they’re going there. A writer is willing to take risks for that wondering. A writer cares that much about his or her subject.
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
“You have to sit there,” as Kurt said. “It’s physically uncomfortable, it’s physically bad for someone to sit still that long, and it’s socially bad for a person to be alone that much. The working conditions are really bad. Nobody has ever found the solution to that.”44
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
Find a subject you care about and which you in your heart feel others should care about [italics mine]. It is this genuine caring, and not your games with language, which will be the most compelling and seductive element in your style.
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
A notion abounds that difficult writing—archaic, convoluted, or chock-full of esoteric words—is somehow elevated, more intelligent than plainspoken language. If you can’t understand it, it must be really superior. Vonnegut based more than one novel on the absurdity of such premises.
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
Conflict within the same character makes that character more complex and compelling. And believable.
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
All writing teaches—communicates something about something. Even bad writing “teaches.” So if you’re writing, you’re teaching. You can’t help it. But then there’s intentional teaching through writing.
Kurt Vonnegut • Pity the Reader: On Writing with Style
Writing is a generosity, even to yourself.